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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tom wasn't going to hurt Harry. He was out to kill Draco! Oh I need chapter 4! What happens next?
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does Harry know any magic or because he had been sick when younger effect that? I would think he would know a bit of magic does he have a wand? This is good keep writing update soon.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good but this last chapter stated that Tom managed to slash Draco's shoulder with a knife. The next thing we know is he is holding Harry and explaining things. Did they take care of the "slash" on Draco's shoulder? You write really well (a bit 'formal' but that is ok) only sometimes there are some things left out? You other stories posted are great too. Keep writing I look forward to reading more.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was a good chapter. The only problem was that it felt a little bit rushed (just constructive criticism, don't like flamers either), need to take it a bit slower and go into more details. But good chapter, i love this story please update soon.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last two chapters...
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
Can't wait for more
Chow for now!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Harry
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 please! What happens next?
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please please update!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute, Harry. I like where this story is going, please update soon, Please say that Tom will make another appearance.