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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah... if only I didn't make mistakes myself while recomending to someone that they get a beta... heh ^^;;; Sorry about that... it's three AM at the moment ^^;;;
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I agree with Severus and Lucius. Tom won't stop. Need chapter 5!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. The plot is awesome but the grammer is kind of distracting. It bugs me when I have to stop reading to figure out what word you meant to type. You might want to consider getting a beta. Please don't think that this is meant to be a flame, it's not. I just think that your story will flow alot better if you had someone double checking your work.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update, pls keep going this is REALLY, REALLY good.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, bye
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good stuff dear keep it up !!!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww they are so cute together
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww that was a cute chapter
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good story update soon!
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh GREAT , I love this story , go on , go on