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for Once Upon a Time

by LeoZodiac

person Storm
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update. can't wait for more. I love Blaise! He's very funny and I hope to see more of his character in the future. Great job!
person Kagaya
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so fun.

Yay for Draco Harry fluff.
Yay for over-protective Draco.

I sense mpreg.
Huhuhu. I'm right right? right?

^_^
person BLACK*PLAGUE
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DELIGHTFUL. I found your stories on plain old fanfiction.net and looked everywhere for a link to the whole ones. The I was hit with a dumb thought, try ADULTFANFICTION. Duh!!!! These are very nice stories(I like your other ones too). Please update soon.
person Amessis
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this!
person Nita
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more more can't wait for more. its bin soo long keep up the good work better be more on your other stories too. naywayz keep on writin!
-Nita
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry doesn't know? He will be able to get pregnant. Right? Need chapter 6!
person alix
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK you said in earlier chapters that Harry read about veelas and knows magic... so why wouldn't he know that he could give Draco children? I really like your stories but sometimes they are not consistant. You say he knows about something and then later it seems like he doesn't. Anyway I still like the story but try not to make Harry into a wimp. Update soon
person asdf
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"...the veela in me..."-draco
HAHAHA! Had a good chuckle over that one. Language/grammar isn't too good, could use a beta. Overall good effort.
person elecktra
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent!! I'm sooo loving this story! Please update ASAP!!!!
person Julie
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story; I really do enjoy it, but perhaps you would consider getting a beta? Sometimes it's easier for sometone who didn't write the story to catch mistakes... I don't mean to offend you or anything, there are just some commas or letters missing throughout the story... just a thought.