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for Once Upon a Time

by LeoZodiac

person kisa
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
when are you going to finish the story it was great and i can't fined it anywhere pleas update it.
person Kiki
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Update soon.
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
more please? What will happen now??? But i really love harry/tom one-sided of course i just love seeing tom so...you know... Then what's gonna happen to pansy? Is she pregnant?? Nooo i pray to all dieties that she's not or else i'll rip her apart.
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Updated [2006-03-13] -:- Would of really loved to seen where you were going with this story and so many of your other ones
K.
person Vittani
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey you have to update this.
person alix
schedule March 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. glad that Draco didn\'t get to do anything with Pansy but sorry that Tom got his way with Harry. Try not to make Harry too helpless or that he doesn\'t know about magical things. You are doing ok right now but it would b nice if Harry could or would do a bit a magic. I think you said something about he didn\'t like to use it because he didn\'t want to hurt anyone? If so couldn\'t he get some more training to get control. It seems like his parents sheltered him alot because he was sick when he was little. That happens I suppose the parents never really get over it and always see the kids as little. Maybe now that Harry is away from home he will get to get out more and do things. I am not in anyway saying that I don\'t like this story because I very much like it and think you are doing a great job so pleae continue when you can and thx so much for posting. BTW I loved the whole thing about about changing the colors of the room and I got a real funny look on my face thinking of orange and purple together (yuck) the purple maybe but NO orange
person lita
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am soo enjoying this story!! I so can't wait for the next chappy!!! Your doing a great job on the story. Update ASAP!!!
person Drovna Malfoy
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!!
Please update soon
person p
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You write great stories but sometimes it seems like you make Harry too weak or meak. Harry would have said more about Draco having the one night stands and since his mother taught him magic.... even though he doesn't want to hurt anyone I think he would at least use some sort of protection charms/shields. Something that would keep him safe but not really hurt anyone. Don't make Harry such a wimp please.
person Frikin Carefree
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm So very Happy you've Updated I Really Do like this Story even if it started out a bit cliche It still very good