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by moirasfate

person queeneb
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok what an ...intresting story lol my god update soon :)
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another fantastic chapter!
person Lulu
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I love it so far! Update again very soon please.
person Lulu
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is going to get very interesting.
person SeductionsClaim
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOO good start, can't wait for more
person whatever
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm................. you know what i think i love this story but i won't know for sure unless u write another chapter
person Anon
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good setup and introduction to your story. I can hardly wait for the next installments. But please take a bit of time to give your chapters descriptive names rather than just '2. Chapter 2'. Just a short idea of the chapter contents makes the reader much more interested in reading your story.