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for Pretty Track Marks

by DeniPie

person Cherry Berry
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Deni,

I love you stories so much, the fact that they aren't mindles sex between to fiction characters is a sight for sore eyes!

I also like how you seem to always keep the characters in... well character.

It gives me confidence to post mine knowing there are other authors and readers who like porn WITH a plot.

~
Cherry
person juri
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I wanna know is whom Hermione ends up with? Viktor? Draco? You sure don't give any clues away.
person Yawn
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, good, good! What more can I say about your writing? It was a compelling look into Viktor's family and his sad situation. I'm forever hooked on your stories.
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Are the P.O.V.s going to switch back and forth between Viktor and Hermione? <.< Does Draco tell Hermione that Viktor has the dark mark or is he going to hint at it? Update again soon! ^___^
person Soranji
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay once again you have gotten me hooked on another story. I really like this pairing anc can't wait for you update.
person fubu
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I thought the 1st chapter was good, I'm blown away by the overall story. You totally rock!!
person Sea
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy all of your writings. Looking forward to your next update!
person Katelynxm
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your right, there arent enough vic fics out there, please continue!
person Lulu
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! I really enjoyed Bulgarian Mascara and this one looks like it will be just as great. I enjoy reading your fiction. You stay true to the character and that is very rare. It's not just mindless sex and that
person LucKyo
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, poor Viktor. Forced to take The Dark Mark and then having to hide it from the woman he loves. Rough life. Glad Malfoy's in this to add his snotty two cents in and cause trouble. And now I'm DYING, literally jumping up and down in my seat wondering what happens next. Awesome chappie.