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for Long Time Coming

by LeoZodiac

person thrnbrooke
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So the rapist is either Theo or Blaise. Not good. I hope Draco is smarter then this person thinks. Harry would never leave them. I hope Harry is smart enough to show the threats and things to Draco. And Jamie... there is no way that little girl could be turned against her father. She adores Harry! Can't wait for chapter 4!
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful if not a bit fast. Harry just accepted him back. I would have thought it would have taken time. Don't get me wrong I love them together. I really adore Jamie. Chapter 3 please!
person momoko
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person JJ
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.K. Who raped Harry? I think that will be important in this story. Wouldn't they have found some evidence of the assult when they were searching for Harry? And how do the Malfoy's know that Harry can survive childbirth with the potion if no one has before? I don't think they know about Jaimie, or they would know about Harry. I'm glad they want Draco to be happy. You're getting right into this story pretty quick.
person myniephoenix
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
could be interesting.. i love harry left stories with plot... :)
person ladyX
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this looks promising. cant wait for more
person IYYashi
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* i want more! please! I will do just about anything to read more right now....just so you know....
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way u have the story goin hopefully ur not one of the author that start a story n never update...update soon
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it.
Please update soon. I hope this isnt a oneshot
bc that would make me very sad... :(
update soon!