rate_review Reviews

You did an excellent job of weaving the info about the rape into the story. I feel like you answered my questions personally. Sorry about that. As a teacher, I often think about questions to answer from text and predictions about what will happen next. I wish I could make my students do it, too. Anyway, I predict that Blaze will be the culprit, but you could fool us with Nott. But you kinda gave away the action in your story by having them plan it out in their thoughts, unless you plan on having that as the plan and someone, maybe Jaimie, foul it up. She seems to be a bit of a Seer - she's worried about exactly what you have planned for Harry. Let's hope the Dursley's will convince Draco, if Jaimie doesn't, that Harry would never leave his daughter and that he has to find him if he is taken. Also, how about mentioning the potion or spell that was used to make Harry powerless for his rape as part of the abduction scene. And remember - you don't have to answer any reviewer. It's your story. After all, it's on my must read list, so its good.

Great update. Can't wait for more.

Love how quickly you update. Keep it up!!

ooh cooL!!
I wonder who was the rapist: theo or blaise? hmm...
By the way, its Zabini, not Zambini...still a minor error tho! Its ok :D
I saw other authors make it :D
I LOVE this story! and you're so good at updating!!
Thank you!
update soon!!

nice start. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Keep them comming

Cool chappie. I came back to the and and there is an update to this great story. I am glad they found each other but I have a feeling it is going to be a bit "bumpy" sure they made up but I think other things are going to get in the way. Like those "bad men" Jamie is worried about I wonder if they are wizards and not from Harry's work. Anyway great job update soon

Ok, I like it a lot, but I do have to ask you to review the whole thing and possibly rewrite a few parts... for instance, you had me believing Harry

YAY!!! More soon please!

so it was either Theo or Blaise...*ponders* which could it be? I've never seen a fic with a bad Blaise so i am assuming it is Theo but hey if you want to be difffernt...cant waqit for more

Very intriguing, so either Blaise or Theo has a lot to answer to. Blaise's last name is ZABINI, though. I've never seen a story that had the Dursley's being so redeemed. Can't wait for more.