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for Long Time Coming

by LeoZodiac

person angel
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... how did he get in to the manor ... please please update soon and later for now

angel
person LazySnake
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...interesting
person momoko
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I like it
person angel
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great story ....please please update soon i would love to read more ... keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person hp_Reader
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Everyone seems so "nice" (you know, Malfoys, Dursleys...wierd but I like it) - excpet of course for whoever is the one that raped Harry...pls keep going and update
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking it's Blaise. Or was it Theo's way to spend time with Draco? Oh I need chapter 5! What happens next?
person momoko
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person anonymous
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. Wondering who the stalker is. please update soon
person Me
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you aren't able to take a little criticism! I'm sure you'll delete this one too. But I still stand by what I said before, they are way OOC and you need a beta.
person avihenda
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet chapter. Liked it :-)