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for Long Time Coming

by LeoZodiac

schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
If I had been harry I would of been pissed knowing that draco had started moving on. With his kidnapper no less! Wouldn't it of taken harry a while to get over the fact that the man he loved even thought he left leaving the daughter he was willing to die to give birth two behind? Its a good story but I can't understand why all the emotional parts were moved forword so quickly I think it would of been better if draco had had to work for harry instead of harry just forgiving and forgetting.
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Only Harry would think that he needed forgiveness. Draco, on the other hand, is being kind of a turd. He could wait all those years for Harry and now, even knowing that Harry is carrying his baby, he starts up a relationship with Theo. He didn't even let the bed get cold before he took up with another partner. Shame on him. Great story! p
schedule April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Of course, Harry would forgive Draco within the first few minutes of being together again. That is two strikes there DM, so he better watch himself. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
person beauty7890102
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story here i liked it alot.
person Leah
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
somethings missing...REMUS!
person Kagaya
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh...Harry finally woke up. It was sweet how he would wake up cause he was worried about Jamie. Parents protective instincts. *Grin*
person angel
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it .. im glad that theo is in azkaban and everyone is happy now .. thaqt was a great story and i cant wait in till you next one in till then later for now

angel
person Juicey
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a cute story I like all your stories so far glad to know you can complete them. @~~~~
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good ending! I hope you continue to write more stories because you are a great writer!
Love and a Peace,
~*~Kates~*~
person anonymous
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great ending, please let there be a sequel.