rate_review Reviews

I higher the chapters go, the wilder the plot gets...and I love that!

Merry Christmas, Happy Christmas or Happy Hanukkah! Long live EVEN tempered Notts & Lisa. ^_^

You write really well overall and I like the focus on Slytherin dynamics.

I have to wonder about the sex scenes though. Have you ever had anal sex? If he'd really started to fuck her ass without any preparation or lube, there is NO way her cries would have "gradually turned to pleasure." Not a possibility. Nor would she have come from that alone, unless he'd inadvertently hit her prostate. I think in general people write anal sex very unrealistically. If you don't have experience with sexual practices that you're writing about, you should research them or have someone who has read through them.

If it had happened this way she would most likely have sustained injuries and been hurting for days or weeks if not longer. Not a chance that she would have started to like it if it'd begun that way.

Even though I've read this story a million times before you reposted (can't remember if I reviewed though) I'll review now since I know how awesomely addicitng this plot is. And though the Notts character makes me want to punch him (fictional character or not) I think you're a brilliant author. I've read all your other stories and loved them, especially the Hermione/Draco fanfic "Subjugation".

It'll be hard to capture the reviews you had before, but don't discourage. I'm sure you will. I love rereading this again.

i love it!

Whew! Glad I read your author's note or I would have been freaking about now. Thought you had given up on this story for a moment.