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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Really well written & I love the way you've drawn Snape's character - very believable.
Very much enjoyed the story & look forward to more of your work in the future!
Very much enjoyed the story & look forward to more of your work in the future!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story! I liked it a lot! Awsome bit of writing you did here!
Tiffany
Tiffany
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cries oh awesome romantic story just what I needed to read.
Bravo!!
Bravo!!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, what a great story. I'm so glad that you changed something in Chapter 5 and caused it to be moved to the head of the line. I would never have found it otherwise and that would have been my loss. Thank you for sharing it.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very cute and sweet story! I loved how Hermione chased after Snape; I could imagine him not believing he was worthy of love, especially Hermione's love.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is just so cute.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3 - Tsk, tsk, the stupid git. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope she isn't too downheartened. The nutter, to throw that back on her.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The second half of ch. 5 was well worth coming back for ;)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - Brilliant, the girl's game plan is brilliant! You can almost see Ron's strategy showing here. I also like very much the comments you are having Severus make to himself in response to her actions.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best Hermione/Severus fics that I have ever read.....your portrayal of Snape as the snarky yet inwardly insecure/lonely is divine, and Hermione is one touch witch! Thank you for writing such an entertaining, romantic tale!