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for Playing the Game

by indigonightowl

person Bree
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I just read this story in its entirety and I am crying. That was such a great sweet short story. Seriously, I'm still crying! Wow I'm a sap! Thanks though for that great read:)
person June W
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - thank you for a lovely story and epilogue! You had me worried several times (ooh, how Harry complicates things....) but all turned out happily, to my relief. I'm glad she was persistent with him. I hope to see another story from your pen soon!
person Kenda
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe, that was fantastic. It was so sweet and funny and yet you managed to keep Snape completely believble. I have to admit it I cried a couple of times when reading it. Thankyou for your wonderful story just what I needed to relieve the horror and quesiness that ensued this morning after my so called friend sent me a link for a Snape/Hagrid Archive ...eugh scary
person anya
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful. Your characterization was extremely well done. The emotions were real without being over the top. It was easy to believe it all. Brilliant!
person SiriuslySevered
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! More chapters, NOW!

I love your story idea. Such a typical Severus... Haha.
person DawnEB
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. There is just the right amount of humour, snark and paranoia in Severus, and Hermione is just pushy enough.

Just one thing, 'Alright, so' at the end of ch. 5. Did something get cut off? It seems a little unfinished.

Looking forward to your next update :)
person K
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet, i had tears in my eyes.
person SiriuslySevered
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think something got cut off at the end of Chapter 5...
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Chapter 5 cut off?
person Stormi
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3 - Granger at a loss for words. Go Hermoine!