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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story had it all-humour, suspense, sadness and joy. It was completely believable. If you write a book I will buy it. You are very gifted and I have read ALOT. Keep going.....
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lovely
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A great little fanfic!! :)
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction this fic is going so far. I like seeing Snape a little off guard and Hermione a little aggressive. I have just one minor concrit. At the dance, you have Hermione dancing with Remus Lupin -- and a bit later in the garden with Severus there is mention of the full moon. It's not likely that Remus would be dancing if there was a full moon! Please take this in the manner in which it was intended -- not to hurt, but help. Thanks, Dia
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY liked Chapter 7. Good story, well done.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A really sweet story.I loved both of them.Of course, I wanted to shake Severus Good job!
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you ended it with the same sentence as the opening, repeated once in the middle, of course. I'll have to take a point for a wrong spelling ("lead" is a heavy metal, "led" is to have preceded something or someone in a specific direction), but otherwise it's full points and extra credit for infinite grace.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story was awesome!! i loved it, soo amzing.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely exquisite! I'm so glad you sent the link to WIKTT! The story was fabulously well-written, the characters believable, and I think I only caught about 5 oops-es, spelling and grammar-wise, in the whole thing. You followed all the conventions regarding a romance without sounding the least bit cliched. I sincerely hope you keep writing and post such gems often!!!
In awe,
Michelle
In awe,
Michelle