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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I do agree with what I believe has been said (and deleted) by several other posters: the grammar in this fic is terrible. But, hey, fuck grammar. I'm a grammar-freak and I liked this plot so much that I still kept reading it. Severus/Hermione fanfiction is well known for authors possessing a deep knowledge and control of the English language, but not being up there doesn't mean anything. Practice makes perfect. So maybe you could use a beta, but there is NOTHING wrong with this story line. I like it.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, poor Hermione but I am glad Severus is there to help her get through Ron's death. Update again soon.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To use a Ronism "Bloody Hell!" As usual, quite brilliant! More Please!?! Your greatest fan Amethystique ;o)X
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness poor Ron! I loved the line Hermione gave that man saying she would make Voldomort look like a school boy. *Shivers* That is very sweet of Severus to give her space so she can let out her emotions on what had happened. Great job on the chapter this is getting even more suspenceful every time I read this.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man ... poor harry and mione .. ron.. man ..please please please update soon adn later for now
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So do I..After all that work,I really hope his fears are wrong too..great chapter!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25 Omigod, you mean we've been bad mouthing Ron and it hasn't even been Ron? hahahaha Poor bloke. Really interesting chapter. So I wonder what's going to happen...did he tell Voldemort of Hermione's plan? will the attack still take place? And very importantly, Where the heck is the real Ron?
Nevermind ducking anything...get thee to the computer and type, my dear.
Nevermind ducking anything...get thee to the computer and type, my dear.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Forgive me for tossing that book at you. Please update soon.
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man what happen to the real ron then ...please please please update soon ....later for now
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