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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hermione has a real depth to her that most do not, at least not in this section. She's a real personality... and that compels (? damn i cant spell) me to WANT to know more. Excellent work.
schedule
December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow.. This story has caught my attention very well. I like how you are writing it. I really can't put into words how I feel right now. Hope you update again soon.
Love ya
Love ya
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys!
I'm replying to the last review left by firewall. I appreciate your honesty. Your comment didn't upset me at all. I'm trying to inprove my writing with each story I do.
Also, I want to thank everyone for the great reviews. I'm glad everyone is enjoy the story. I will be wroking on chapter 8 later tongith and hope you guys enjoy it!
Keep the reviews coming!
Tiffany
a*k*a
slytheringriffendor21
I'm replying to the last review left by firewall. I appreciate your honesty. Your comment didn't upset me at all. I'm trying to inprove my writing with each story I do.
Also, I want to thank everyone for the great reviews. I'm glad everyone is enjoy the story. I will be wroking on chapter 8 later tongith and hope you guys enjoy it!
Keep the reviews coming!
Tiffany
a*k*a
slytheringriffendor21
schedule
December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! that was some fight! Those two definetly have a lot of pent up anger towards each other. Keep up the great work!
schedule
December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg omg, what happens next! Oh man she kicked his butt there for a min.
schedule
December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope mione can tell him .... please please more .this id great ...later for now
angel
angel
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ....how did she survive the first round of avery, lestrange, and lucius please please more ..in cant wait in till then next update .. keep up the awesome work and later for now
angel
angel
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No this chapter doesn't suck, its great! Glad Severus knows what she went through the first time with those three. Keep up the great work!
schedule
December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually this chapter didn't *suck* at all. You shouldn't feel you have to apologize for your writing. It is yours and it is personal, you have just chosen to share it with us. I thought the chapter moved things along somewhat but more importantly, it filled in some background. You are now ready to move along and take us with you.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was horrible what happen to Hermione. I wonder why she didn't scream out, maybe she figured she didn't want to give those P**cks the satisfacation. Keep up the great work and I look forward to reading more.