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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. This story is progressing nicely.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow ... please please more ...
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like the story. Looking forward to the drama of Hermione overcoming her issue to be with Snape.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! excellent chapter! The plot is thickening very nicely, you do such a great job at luring your readers in and capturing their attention when they least expect it. BRAVO!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and i can't wait to read more! However, I have one nit-pick. . .i think you mean vial- a container, usually class, to hold things in- vile means bad/detestable, etc. Keep up the good work, though. ~A
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh getting good.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!, There is definetly something deeper going on with Hermione, I hope Severus can help her. Can't wait until you update again.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait for an update!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man poor mione .. i hope the spells in the book work ... please please more ..later for now
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - I just want to make a general statement that I hope won't offend you. I've noticed a general improvement of your dialogue in this story. It seems more natural and not as formalized. It's probably all the writing you've been doing. Nicely done.