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for Our Paths Cross Again

by slygriff21

person kathyjo
schedule January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start so far..not fully sure on this version of hermoine..I mean I don't mind a hermoine who has a back bone but boy she is just surly.other than that I think I will enjoy the journey
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why in the world would Harry leave Hogwarts? Especially when Ron was killed in his apartment and so they knew that there was more danger than usual since they will be suspect when they don't hear from the fake Ron. excellent chapter. p
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ackkkk. You really need to go back to that last phrase and change "could" to "couldn't" (I "could" stand for something to something to happen to her). Very emotional chapter knowing what is coming. p
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! For me the only thing that was missing was for Hermione and Severus to be cursing, cutting (or whatever) Lucius from different angles. And for Harry and Hermione to have a moment with a promise of a friendship in the future as they had in the past. Very original and enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story even if sad and disturbing. Poor SS, he is the one that is owned (by HG) and his life will never be the same. I am really looking forward to one or both of them taking on LM and finishing off OR "helping" him lose his mind, complete with vivid dreams, so that sharing a ward with the Longbottoms is something that he stives for. He deserves it!! p
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please, please tell me that SS and HG get to tag team the creeps that raped and beat Hermione. Great chapter. Love that HG is trusting SS to take care of her...he might as well give in and realize that he belongs with HG. p
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So while the guys were sitting around the table discussing how Hermione killed the death eaters, why didn't any of them associate her methods as those used on the Weasleys? It is truly a wonder that she is ever lucid with what she has experienced. excellent chapter. p
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Who could not love Remus? He is such a gentle soul. I'm glad that SS shared what Hermione had been through with RL so that it was not something he had to carry alone...he needs support to be able to support her. p
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The memory of SS becoming a death eater should be part of James' life review since his bullying is what played a part in SS finding himself in that position. It is good that HG now knows that SS can understand what she went through. p
person Anon
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?