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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering what Malfoy will do but doing to the Gryffindor dorms is very promising ;)
update soon, please, I'm dying to know what happens next!
update soon, please, I'm dying to know what happens next!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing on a different chapter. I noticed I didnt review this story in this section. Must have been the one on the other site.
As for the tiny itsy bitsy typos, I try and give a balanced review, not just
blind praise but ways to improve, and you leave little to pick on but the
odd typo. I mean, here's one, for example XD.
"Goyle wanted to say something like, he didn't want to follow Malfoy's
orders, but he knew that the Malfoy's were proper and respected among the
Slytherins, among the entire pureblood community."
Now I might be wrong, but I think it would just be "Malfoys", I think, I'm
not 100% sure. But that's the kind of mistake I mean, really minor stuff, so
not important. I think thats nit picky and I am probably wrong.
See? Ya leave me very little to criticise XD.
As for the tiny itsy bitsy typos, I try and give a balanced review, not just
blind praise but ways to improve, and you leave little to pick on but the
odd typo. I mean, here's one, for example XD.
"Goyle wanted to say something like, he didn't want to follow Malfoy's
orders, but he knew that the Malfoy's were proper and respected among the
Slytherins, among the entire pureblood community."
Now I might be wrong, but I think it would just be "Malfoys", I think, I'm
not 100% sure. But that's the kind of mistake I mean, really minor stuff, so
not important. I think thats nit picky and I am probably wrong.
See? Ya leave me very little to criticise XD.
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been so long I've forgotten what I used to sign my reviews with XD. Hehe, anyway, glad to see you back in the writing game, friend. You've still got that style of yours, full of fluid, free-running descriptions and emotional perspective. There were a couple of tiny mistakes, but hey, as if they matter XD. This was more of a connecting chapter, so not a lot actually happened, but it set the scene nicely for future developments, and I'll be interested to see where it goes from here ^^...
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please add more to this story.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are a genius, an absolute genius! youve inspired me to continue writing!!!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(snickers happily, looking pleased)
Puking up on someone is SO embarassing! ...But puking in front of someone into an orange bucket decorated with red anime cats is even WORSE in a way...(coughs)
So, when are you gonna update this, huh?
Puking up on someone is SO embarassing! ...But puking in front of someone into an orange bucket decorated with red anime cats is even WORSE in a way...(coughs)
So, when are you gonna update this, huh?
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fooking awesome u have 2 add 2 that. I want 2 read more about this 1. It intrests me. SO Write MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is cute, I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the next chapter. A ruffled Draco because of a threat of a kiss, I like it, not the usual I can seduce any girl Draco.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was beautyfully written!
You sure know how to captivate a reader.
I'll be awaiting your next chapter, I almost can't wait to know what's going to happen!
You sure know how to captivate a reader.
I'll be awaiting your next chapter, I almost can't wait to know what's going to happen!
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! I'm really impressed... this is very original and a completely new take on D/G!
I love it... it's well written, and there is a sort of captivating mood about it!
I am really looking forward to reading more of this!
I love it... it's well written, and there is a sort of captivating mood about it!
I am really looking forward to reading more of this!