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for Charmed Harry

by LeoZodiac

person tammygirl
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think thats excelent totally ironic two men carrying on the charm line
person PJ
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I read your note at the beginning rather wierd that he would bind his powers for the trip unless it was so no one would know who/what he was. Anyway great chapter. Loved that Evan was able to stop Draco this time but somehow I don't think this will be the end of it. Keep writing update soon
person angel
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man malfoy .... ron why are you not trying to stop him ..please please more more please update soon .. keep up the awesome work and later for now

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person anon
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Try not to make Harry too much of a wimp. I was thinking that he could have used some magic on Draco to get him to stop unless they are trying to hide the fact that Evan is a wizard. Still though it went too far and maybe Evan should have blasted him with something. Update soon this is good
person PJ
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I am intersted in how Ron & Draco became bonded. That should be good. I am glad they are going to press charges. Hopefully they will be able to get them to stick and Malfoy won't be able to get out of them. Maybe the truth serum or something. I Cole still part demon? Just curious. Also will they find out that Evan is really Harry. I am glad they were able to find out that Evan was being forced and not going along with it. Update soon
person Storm
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Thanks for that. I enjoyed all the back story. Are you going to do a flashback of when Piper and Leo found out? But I liked these flashbacks. Very interesting. Great job! can't wait for the next chapter.
person momoko
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Nixinox
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute cute cute. You're writing style isn't great but it isn't bad either, It's good, but needs a bit of improvement. I really want to know about Ron/Malfoy though, lols :p
person Storm
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved Malfoy checking him out and I can't wait to hear why Malfoy is with Ron. Can I have front row seats when Wyatt kills Malfoy? Great job!
person l'etje
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a very nice cross over keep going and post soon and let ron and hermoine be friends again
bye bye and post soon