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Is Miss be doing the in-outie in detention. OMG I hope so! Update tonight PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP.
Toodles.

Ch 5 - I like this chapter; I think it's believable and plausible that she would be tired of being the "good girl" and sidekick, etc. I think you have to have some sort of closure/resolution to this story - besides "COMPLETED" - and I'd be happy with "The best you can hope for is Snape will "develop a taste" for Hermione because she's actually just as depraved as he is, just on the other end of the spectrum." Actually, Severus is being quite honorable - he knows Voldy and Dumbledore are both evil in their own ways, yet he still serves the Order in order to get rid of Voldy. I just hope he has an escape plan for when Voldy dies and Dumbledore has no more motivation to save Severus' skin. Hmm, maybe escape plan will involve taking along a willing Hermione and leaving England and Ron and Harry! Not necessarily a romance, just S&H both doing what they want for their own pleasure in the end. Whatever, I'll be waiting for the next chapter!

evil cliffee.....update soon.

man so so close ... and it good to know that albus know the it was he who made snape a monster .... and there is all was the next time she has patrol .... cat wait in till next time ...later

angel

This was sort of a cliffhanger, I guess. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Definitely a change from some of your others - Snape has normally just been misunderstood, but now I think he's awful! This is makihng me feel more unconfortable than most of the other fafic around, possibly because your characterisation of Snape has normally been much more sympathetic. I love how frequently you are able to update - keep up the good work!

Another great story! I love this dark side of Snape you've got going! I can't wait to read the 'detention'! Please update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany

I wish I could continue reading this fic, but after chapter 3 I was beyond disgusted. I know its Dark Fic, which is fine...I guess it just isn't for me. *shrug*

No need to be ashamed girl.
Is that is what gets you going and what your body asks for, go to Snape, negotiate terms and get what you need!

Sandra

ch 4 : sure your Snape is dark but he's still hot ! I'm glas you're such a fast updater.