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Well. There's nothing like being anally raped, I guess. oo;

i think it has rub off on to her ... please more i cant wait in till the 'detention' in till next time later

angel

EEP! The analysis of why Hermione is a masochist is fairly straight on. IS Evil!Ablus going to fix Snape for nailing his girl?

Maria: Snape is a bastard, has no redeeming qualities, but Hermione came to him wiliing and though he will more than likely brutalize her, he is not raping her in this instance. Deep down Hermione actually wants to be brutalized. Snape is into pain but also control. Pain is a tool with which to gain control. He's more interested in accessing Hermione's body right now, than beating her. Though he will do it if he has to. It was more expedient to cast the spell to gain control for what he wants to do. Remember, true evil is seductive and wins others over to it. Snape is true evil incarnate. He wants to draw Hermione into his evil.

Ch 11 - boy, that Dumbledore has poor timing..... Hmm, I wonder if Severus and Hermione can cut a deal - he gives her what she wants, and she will arrange "cover" for him, like making Upper Stranton resemble a hastily-abandoned Order meeting place so that Severus doesn't get beaten up. She can even leave "evidence" that another Death Eater betrayed Voldemort. Dumbledore's actions in this fic would be enough to make anyone's heart "black" and I hope Hermione sees that. Thanks for the new chapter!

So what...is she trying to gain his approval which she has sought and been denied all these years? And him...is he trying to justify his actions by saying they are for her own good? that she needs to experience the truth of the situation? that only he is not manipulating her? Yup you are right, they are both f*cked.

go snape you tell him ... ~lol~ please more

angel

Ohhhh! I love this story! This is probably one of your best yet! I can't wait for you to update again and soon!

Tiffany

I feel I should be hiding my eyes ...eep.

let it be known, i have fallen and can't get up. Man i loved this chapter!