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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is so predatory but not as nasty as you portrayed. Poor curious Hermione, he's claiming her and she doesnt seem to have a choice. What will she do if she tries to break away after the curiosity is satisifed? Hmmm
After this perhaps a Christmas fic? Where Snape chases a reluctant Hermione. :)
After this perhaps a Christmas fic? Where Snape chases a reluctant Hermione. :)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my he is rough, does her ever stop? Now thats a man i would love to have.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot!! esp when albus hears severus fuckign hermione, and severus comes out naked! u really can write a 'good' severus and a 'bad' severus. well update soon
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've been a luker for so long but i have to say your just fantastic and this has to be one of your best stories. Hope you update soon and keep up the awsomwe work
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 9 - "petrificus partialus" makes sense to me, too. He could've just held her down, but he's a wizard, so he might as well use a spell... And can you write a little faster, please? (heh-heh! joke)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh what will happen. I shall be waiting for a update. I have to say you me going , i almost fall out in chair as i went to the screen reading the story..WONDERFUL!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it!! esp the hair part. but when snape eats her he doesnt seem so bad all except the fact he bit her till se bled...lol....well update soon
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome story. plus, I love your style of writing!
can't wait for the next chapter!!
can't wait for the next chapter!!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grand chapters. I'm so happy you update so quickly. It's wonderfully dark and sinfull.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
9:07pm Dumbledore is too evil--to let Snape get away with his enjoyment. What happens after the Potion Master has his fill, will he want to keep such a wanton woman within reach? More soon, please.