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person french girl
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mrs Figg YOU are the devil, cutting the story right here is really not fair .
I won't be able to wait until tomorrow.
person SavageAngel
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I have read and re-read all of your stories and loved them. But this is...wow. I'm one of the odd ones that goes in for the dark fic and this is by far the best I have ever read. I can't wait for the updates! Keep up the excellent work.

Angela

P.S. you update so much, how do u have time for anything else? lol
person firewall
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, she's young and foolish. I only hope she gets what she really wants and not what she just thinks she wants. Carry on, Ms Figg, you astound me with the variety of genre you are able to write.
person Maria
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would've liked to read what he'd do if she disobeyed him by moving - why is a sadistic bastard that takes pleasure from others' pain giving her a chance to escape punishment for disobedience? And shouldn't she be terrified of being physically brutalized? Yes, we all have 'rape' fantasies - that's why we're reading Snape fanfiction - but being truly forced is a horrific idea. Don't get me wrong - I love your writing and all your stories, but if this is a truly evil!Snape then this shouldn't end up as a seduction.
person denise
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great! i like it alot! i bet my husband would like to know that petrificus.... spell lol, i never stay still when he wants me to.....
person Brianne
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK He's like wicked creepy like...Damnit I can't stop reading!
person Snapelover11
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and lovely. I like the dark Snape. What I like even more, would be the possible dark Hermione. Who says you can't turn the tables every now and agian? Everyone writes fics about HG turning SS. Why can't there be one where SS turns HG to the darkness? I'm down with that!
person ccrawley
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that sucks for Hermione not being able to move and Snape's so total control. Kinda of want her to disobey to see what will happen. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Maria
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Ms Figg - yes, I see what you mean about Snape seducing Hermione into evil. And you're right - you did portray hermione as having masochistic tendencies. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story!
person angel
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ what was great .. i love the spell... please please update soon ..later for now

angel