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person leto
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MsFigg, I love your stories, but I hate this evil, raping Snape. After he almost choked her to death, the image of him walking proudly to talk to Dumbledore while his lower regions are covered with Hermione's blood sealed the deal. There seems to be more pain than pleasure for poor Hermione, which takes the fun out of the lemony goodness. At this point, I'm rooting for Hermione to hex his balls off!
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Koda: lol He didn't anally rape Hermione. He just changed positions.
person JW
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - hmm, how will he react to her statement.... he could be insulted and angry, OR he could laugh because he understands her battle - good girls aren't supposed to like bad boys. Of course, since he's rather proud of being a bad boy, I -think- he'd understand and would laugh at her statement. Okay, where's the next chapter??
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. umph. aksdghiasdgklag. That is a painful place to stop.
person a_reader
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person denise
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! mean snape.....
person Marsha
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 10 & 111 Heee. Heee. Heee. What a wonderfully guilty pleasure. Love brutal dominating Severus. Always thought Dumbdore was a prick. Severus' analysis of why Hermione is a masochist is dead on.
person jg
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
honesty he will probably react by laughing
person Megan
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it's hysterical that you update faster than anyone, ever, and people are actually telling you to go faster :) LOVE it ALL; I'm extremely excited to see what this Snape has in store for Hermione. The way you write is just so fascinating and I continue to be amazed at how well you understand the psychology of sexuality. BRAVO for making it about submission and humiliation on a psychological level and not just some mindless whips and chains. Snape WOULD know how to completely control the whole of Hermione - she is a naive young woman, after all :)
person Edania
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhh damn this si getting good. Oh man i so wish i was in her place at the moment.