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Damn! Even when he is a cold heartless bastard he is as hot as hell!!

I would love it if you kept the story going. After what albus said about muggleborns on training, I had it in my head that hermione had heard and would go herself as a muggleborn in order to help snape, the order, whoever. Of course, I have no idea where you were planning on going with the story, but I definitely think it has more potential and more avenues to explore as you go.
I also liked your comment on maybe hermione having an effect on snape. Not that he needs character changes, I love reading him with how you have portrayed him thus far. And yes, I agree that dumbledore is shaping up very interestingly... when he watched snape and hermione for a minute, it really intrigued me and had me thinking that perhaps dumbledore was a dirty old man when you take everything else away

So, basically, very, very cool story and I will keep my eye out for any further chapters if you choose to write more (or any other stories of yours, come to think of it).
thanks
keesli

ch 13 : your PWP is certainly worth a PWithPlot ! I would be curious to see how Hermione will react to Albus' "management" of people and if she'll explore her dark side further...with Snape of course. That idea of blackmail has potential you see.

Ohh yay you are writing more! I love it so far, can't wait for more chapters.

10:05am Would be nice to see how far Hermione can take her darkside. It would be really nice to see her mess with Dumbledore's plans for her--of course, in a sneaky way. What will the Potion Master do to her for getting caught?

Please, please, pleasepleaseplease....update and continuee this story!!!! I love it!!

If I've a proper estimation of how guys like your pragmatic and somewhat evil Dumbledore deal with things, next step is Dumbledore talks with her alone, to make sure she won't be making a fuss about what happened.

Hey, whatever works for you, Ms Figg. I just felt Snape's dismissal of Hermione was a really effective end to the story because it emphasized his callousness and deep-seated darkness. It was just a powerful ending.

HOWEVER, that being said, you have the ability to develop this story further without losing the strength of your storyline. I know you will stay true to the direction the characters are going. Thank you for your kind words.

Now for this chapter. I was glad to see Hermione begin to look at her situation with more skepticism and dispassion. In this story, I have seen Hermione being manipulated by Snape with her knowledge, naive though it was initially. Then for her to find someone she respected from the light doing the same without her knowledge, would be crushing for her at first. This is perhaps the true loss of innocence.

I'm looking forward tothe next chapter as usual. I can't wait to see where you go with this one. I wonder how strong a pull Harry and Ron will have on her and how Snape will dispel any doubts she may have about his allegiance to the Light. If they are not all very careful, I can see this Hermione going over to the dark. Ah, Ms Figg you give me so many possiblilities to ruminate.

Awsome update! I can't wait to read more! I really love this story so far! Can't wait for more!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany

Oh oh, that was not the best thing to say.
But he demanded honesty!
I hope she will get what she came for...

Sandra