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person JW
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 63-64 - YAY!!!! I can breathe now!!!!! Yeah, Severus' closing arguments did cinch it; he earned her and protected her, while Lucius just lusted for her and the status. And Severus remained true to himself, while giving her what he has never given any other woman, and humbling himself by yielding all power to her to continue or end their relationship at any time. As for him meeting her intellectual and emotional needs - I think she could ask him to help her with potions or whatever research, as he needs intellectual stimulation too. Emotional needs - well, many women prefer to get emotional support from their girlfriends rather than their husbands, but when she needs to release her emotions through sex, he's there for her. I also think that over 200 years or so, they couldn't help but grow and change, so the future might change for their relationship. But I could never see Severus ever using her for status, bragging about their sex life to anyone, which is what Lucius would do. So I'm happy with this ending, although you know I've always been happy with all your fics! Thank you, Ms_Figg!!!!
person usagistu
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope not to see Hermione turn into a total freak. I am a sucker for just SS/hg. NO LM in the picture. But I am sure what ever you do will be good.
person Edania
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh freak, turn her into a freak. I think what they do is get the drop on her.
Let me give a better review on this:

I have to say that i love this story is coming along. I have to also add, i love how you have snape.. not to dark, but not to soft really. What i enjoy in your story, it had alot of action, sex.. yet not to much, but when it did. I was well written and very good and hot! * tries to cool off* And it also has its funny moments. Another thing what i like about you. you finish a story! I have read good SS/HG stories, some good but not finished. I also like ..unlike some stories i read...I do enjoy i nice soft type of snape..I'm a romatic at heart. But i liked how you didn't make too romatic, with the stories i read. some are good, keeping a limit on the romatic.some kinda do a mouse and cat type while others just nothing but romance and make snape too soft..to soon in the story or just too much.
Though i will say that i enjoy the other snape story you did, that was just, not making him too soft but like the dark hero..Anyway that my full review on what i think of this story so far and my thoughts on it. so well in short, enjoying your story.
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok. This is the part of the story where I lose some readers. Thank you for sticking it out this far. In the beginning of this story I said it would be darker than my others. This Hermione and Snape are not a loving couple, no matter how much we wish it were so. Sanpe screws every woman he can and likes it that way. I don't think Hermione should have to adhere to being a good girl while he's a bad boy. I refuse to have every story end the same way. It's boring to write and boring to read. If you want pure HG/SS then you have that up to this point. Go no further. I can't please everyone, so I might as well please myself. (and the panting readers who want Hermione to flip the script) Thanks
person K
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is SWEET, that Sevvie knocked out Lushious. He belongs to hermione, not lushious. I'd love to have them fighting over me too.
person michelle
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why can't she have BOTH of them?!?!
person firewall
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue # I forget -
person K
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the ending, you tied up the best way you could and still be true to the characters in your story. I look forward to your next story.
person firewall
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue # I forget Part II - Sorry I was so excited I pressed review without writing anything. LOL

My, my, my...it took her long enough...2 weeks. Talk about foreplay. You know what, Ms Figg? You have to stay true to your story and if you see a hot threesome taking place who are we to contradict you. As for losing readers...it ain't gonna happen. Looking forward to the next epilogue...whatever number it is.
person chicca
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*tear* Oh Noes its over