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Oooh, I didn't think this could get better, but now we have DARK PLOT too. I love it.

You are correct. Not a nice Snape. And thank you for being so explicit in your description of the type of story this is going to be. Helping get the proper bearing on the compass for this story is the key to reading something dark and enjoying it. Thanks for the heads-up and for the great chapter!

Well, obviously Hermione dried up their polish w/ her Primordial power! Cool- I like it! No one will be able to Lord over Hermione once she realizes her powers. I'm glad you're continuing, it's really a good one. :-)
Laura

Ch 13 - yes, yes, yes!!!! The story continues! Ooh, I am looking forward to Dumbledore (and Lucius) getting their just desserts. And I bet Hermione can be very creative in leaving "evidence" to support Severus' planted false info, although he will have to remind her to not get caught. Hmm, what kind of "rewards" will Severus give Hermione.... THANK YOU for continuing this story!

I am so glad you are continueing this story. I really love evil Dumbledore! He is just so bad. Who will figure out Hermione's new gift? How will she react and will she be able to handle the responciblity? Especially now that she has gotten a taste for being a sub! Hope she can find the right things to say to Dumbledore so he will get off her back without discovering her newest rock makeing skill.

YOU CAN'T END IT HERE! AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER! I HAVE TO AT LEAST SEE WHAT HAPPENS THE NEXT DAY! PRETTY PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE WITH WHIPPED CREAM, SPRINKLES, CHOCOLATE SYRUP AND A CHERRY ON TOP! DON'T END IT HERE!

YOUR BIGGEST FAN,
TIFFANY

Hmm, I say stop and continue with the #1 ~ What Was I Thinking? series (mainly because I need more,) But if you want, continue with this. Its a great story and I would like to see the whole Hermione Rebel thing also.

Hmm I know the final decision rests with you but please don't forget about WWIT.

Patrice

Please continue. I think that there is still more interesting story to tell in this one.

Continue, please! You've kind of stopped it at a point where Snape has washed his hands of Hermione, but you could put him in a situation where she starts challenging him daily and he feels the need to put her in her place. There are a LOT of ways to dominate a person - it would be interesting to see how he could get a psychological hold over her and really drag her into the "dark side." I would LOVE to read a confrontation between Albus and Hermione. It would be a way of her gaining power in her own right even while willingly relinquishing it in the basest of ways. This all kind of reminds me of Ayn Rand - have you ever read any of her stuff?

I like the story and I hope you continue it. BUT I still would like to have a happy ending. I am a sap at heart and I would like all the stories I like and read to have a happing ending even if it is in the sequel. So please continue and think about what I am asking. I can not place my finger on why I love Severus and Hermione so much as a couple. Can you?