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Jackie: I chose Ms_Figg because even though she is a squib, she knows what's going on, is a scrapper & because I will slap the HELL out of somebody wih a bag full of cat food. lol. Ok. I really chose Ms_Figg because it was a name I could use on multiple HP sites as a log in. Seems nobody wanted it. and being as lazy as I am I didn't want to memorize different login names. Yes, it's that simple. ;)

I say keep going with it, i mean there alot more things you can explore in this story . IBut then again where it is now, is somewhat good, but i think you can explore some more ideas, , how well herm, will react to snape, the next day? will she beg for me, or stay away from him? lots of ideas

12:36pm It wouldn't be bad to end here. However, it would be nice of Hermione to test Dumbledore, maybe even switch sides.

Ch 12 - more, more! I'd like to see Voldemort get killed off, and to have Severus and Hermione lead their own lives together - away from Dumbledore's influence. I'd really like to see Hermione put Dumbledore in his place for controlling her and Severus, get some payback for all those times Dumbledore got Severus in trouble with that false info. Severus and Hermione don't have to have a romantic relationship, but it seems that they both have compatible, almost symbiotic needs; plus they both understand Dumbledore's inner evil.

That was great! Personally I think Hermione should rebel against the old coot, he would deserve what ever she dishes out at him. *Grins* Maybe you can write just one more chapter to wrap things up or something I don't know its up to you.

You know my thoughts already, I find it intriguing that Hermione might turn her back on what is "expected" of her. Like I said, it is acceptable for us to write fics where SS is dark but he gets turned. Since you have already scared some readers away (though I can't figure out why), you might as well go for the gold and venture into unchartered territory. A final frontier for the queen of SS/HG fics. (Yes, you retain that title with me) Why not? We can a;lways return to our loveable SS later. Perhaps reach into the darkness and continue on and let's see Hermione get darker. Not just sexually, for we already see/know her capabilities there. But in life too. This is fiction after all.

Am I trying to sway you? Yes. I think if anyone can pull this subject off, it's you. You have developed a story line that can lead us there plausibly and do a fine job of it. I await your decision. Whatever it may be, I did like this, but it needs some relolusion. Either an epi or continue on getting darker. How dark can Figgy get? I wonder.....

sodomisos con Severus: Er...thank you for that? I seriously considered deleting this lengthy er...I don't think review is the right word...but maybe someone will get something out of it??? I've never yet deleted a comment from anyone unless it was doubled so...it will stay. It has to be one of the strangest comments (outside of Voldy) that I've seen so far.

Interesting how this chapter has refocused the story...glad you decided to continue with it past a PWP. I think it has great potential, especially for introducing the dangerous dichotomy between Snape and Dumbledore for Hermione's alliegence. Who will win her over and whose side will she ultimately end up on. I love the thought of an evil Dumbledore since I have read very few where he is portrayed that way...the way you are setting up the story is almost like Hermione is caught between a proverbial "rock" and a hard place. If she is starting to come into her own powers and starting realize other people's manipulations of her, how is she going to react to Dumbledore, to her friends and teachers, and most importantly, to Snape, who is really the only one who has been honest with her. Can't wait to see where you take the rest of the story!

ohhhh what next..will snape go over the edge and push her to dark side, or will he end up, fucked up in the ned. no one knows.

I don't usually review stories (I know, shame on me) but I felt in this instance, I must.

Please, please continue this story. I would like to see Hemione rebel against Dumbledore and even more, I would like to see her go back to her Potions Master for more domination.

Snape will remain a dark character, but he will have a submissive Hermione as a reward for his service to the light.

Basically, this story is feeding my own masochistic tendencies.

PS I think I have read all your stories and I would just like to say I love them all.

Keep up the good work...You rock!!!