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person denise
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it!! albus is soooo evil, he could be the next dark lord!!! and teh powers hermione has got...whoa! pretty cool. update soon
person jackie
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the first time im reviewing ur story, but i jsut wnated to say, i love it! go Ms. Figg. i was wondering, why did u choose ur name to be ms. figg?
person Pam
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person droxy
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm Dark!Hermione and Dark!Severus wanting autonomy from Dark!Albus and the Dark!Lord? I'd say Hermion's reaction of go ahead and expel me is anattitude I have at work. When one has no fear of repercussions what is the point of take aways when you offer none.
person ladyofthemasque
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sing-song...* I know what's up with the poooo-liiiish! *purrpurrpurr* ~Lotm (Only a feline can look this smug...and live!)
person Snapesslave
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ms_Figg, doing good so far. I was on the fence about you continuing but I'm glad you did. I do like the occasional angsty story and this one is fitting the bill nicely. The polish is her Primordial powers beginning as Dumbledore feared. She thought it and it happened, right? I can't wait unitl Hermione realizes her true potential, providing of course that Dumbledore doesn't get his way and have her turn all goody-goody again. Maybe another "session" with Snape would cement her mind?

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person JW
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - scary! No way out in her vision except death? No Severus to help rescue her? I just hope Dumbly doesn't Obliviate her at three-ish; perhaps she should tell Severus so he can be aware of what's happening. More, please!!
person firewall
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to go to bed!!! No more chapters until I turn off the computer please because I'm compelled to read them.

Okay, now that was one heck of a vision. Okay, all the teachers are involved? I'm surprised. I guess I saw Dumbledore as more of a prime manipulator who directed everything and everyone around him. Ah, Hermione, I hope your primordial powers are strong because you could be up against even a more powerful force in Albus than you were in Snape. This could get nasty, kiddies.

Carry on Ms Figg. Brilliant as usual.
person angel
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please please i would love to read what will happen next ... this is a great story ... please please more ..later for now

angel
person angel
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man ... how is that happen .... the polish dry up ... mione rebelling .... and what will happen to snape.....please please more.. later for now

angel