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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20 - yikes! She didn't see it - Dumbledore DID "try to manipulate her into staying and doing what he wanted" - his hints about Voldemort attacking the Muggle world, saying Harry needs her, reminding her of all her friends, saying Snape is evil. I just hope she never goes against Severus - remember the vision, girl! Dumbledore was yanking your chain! Eeps!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At this point in your story, I'm almost more worried about what Dumbledore will do, rather than Voldemort. This is utterly fascinating.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
most delicious, i hope dumbledore isn't able to manipulate her anymore. She could turn him into a shoe and throw him to the bottom of the lake. Snape could be her "king" to rule at her side, after Voldy Moldy is defeated.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh thats a good one, what will happen. I must say you are a wonderful writer, one of my top favorites!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, this isn't a PWP anymore, is it? Whoa.. it's gotten so interesting.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're continuing this story. I love dark Severus. And I'm enthralled by your new plot-twist.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how is mione doing that ... and i wonder what is going to happen at the meeting with the headmaster ... please please more....later for now
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! You must write more! I am extremely glad that this extended from PWP, it's taken a rather large turn for the better... Fantastic!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Who is going to get to her first?!
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM