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Ch 24 - I think Severus needs to watch his back. Dumbly doesn't want Hermione to have anyone else to depend on, especially Severus, and may try to separate her from Ron and Harry as well. Careful, Severus! Dumbles has the Marauder's Map!

Wow. That's all I have to say...Wow....

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wow. i like the chps (17-18)! they r great. its really incredible how u managed to changes hte story plot so well....from hermione and snape having sex to a whole big problem...

I think that this is getting very complicated--in a good way. There are a lot of dynamics in play. I'm quite interested to see what Voldemort has up his sleeve "this afternoon". It's too soon after the Snape/Dumbledore meeting for Dumbledore to have done anything to endanger Severus, so something else is at work. Thanks for the new chapters! Lovely!!!

So, she's coming to maturity, and she's a Primordial, realizing (though not consciously) her powers. Her innate ability to directly communicate her thoughts and whims to magical phenomenon... what forces could she unleash? What will this power mean to those captors which would pull her limb from limb rather than let her out of their control?

I see her getting darker. I still see, though do not particularly hope for fear of being let down deliciously, the Potions Master allying with this darkness so that they can both break free of the shackles of conformity.

And I have one word for that: Hot.

Goodness gracious! Don't end it here!! I like this story too much for you to end it! I like where you're taking this!! Woo!!!!!

Like that Hermione maybe more powerful than all the dominating men.

oh how did that happen? I am liking this alot, its seems to be a puzzle , right after the other.