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person sullicn
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. All of them! I can't wait to see where you are going for this one. (It's fun watching Big Bad Albus!)
person Edania
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg she turned to the darkside, but does she more plans that he does not know about? Questions, questions, more chapters!
person mekareami
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the dark side of the headmaster you are painting ;)

I guess we can assume her parents/family are toast now... I don't recall that she told Snape what her plans for the summer are though so I can see her making the leap of logic to not blame him for something he didn't know about.

I am enjoying your story emensely, hope to see more soon!
person Pam
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Megan
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn... this is intense. I'm scared of Dumbledore. It's fascinating, but I do have to say... I think it's funny that you've manipulated the story so that Snape is actually coming off as a great person who's been very wronged. I guess it's hard to write "I'm Snape and I'm evil" for more than a couple chapters - characters develop. Anyway, lovely work. VERY interested to see where this goes.
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Laura: Well, the story has definitely taken on its own life. It is interesting to write but is kind of consuming my every thought. lol. I won't be able to rest until it comes to ts conclusion. I am glad you and others are enjoying it.
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's going along very well Ms_Figg. I like a darker Hermione. Maybe that's why I love your portrayal of Hermione as, let's just say, less than the virginal goody-two-shoes. Keep up the good work and the timely updates make my days.

Snapes slave
person ccrawley
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see her controlling her powers. Hope she gets Dumbledore soon and he gets what's coming and the dark lord bows to Hermione. More please.
person a_reader
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh, I'm worried about the Grangers...
person firewall
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, another thing I'm interested in seeing. Snape is so certain he'll be in control of the next fucking. Hmmm, I think he'll be in for a bit of surprise. I'd love to see Hermione assert herself...it would serve the bloody bastard right.