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person Edania
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet if i may a small request, not on the story it self, ..i should have add this before in my last review, but forgot, any chance you might write a story, where hermione goes to snapes's past, or something about snape's past. I only ask cause i do believe i read story of yours that had something like this ..again this is just a idea. Just i don't see many fictions like that and also i am liking the chapters so far.
person aeltiera
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg...wow love the direction the story is taking...though I fear for Hermione's parents...by mentioning them Hermione may have brought them to notice to Dumbledore. Could Dumbledore kill them off, make it look like Snape and the Deatheaters did it, all to solidify Hermione's alligence to the Order? You know some military people and rulers throughout history have justified the use of evil tactics to make a "better" future for society...think the French Revolution...beheadings via guillotine all to "change" society for the better...doing evil things at one point in time to ensure a particular outcome in the future...the question is would Dumbledore stoop to any means to ensure the future as he sees it, much like Voldemort? Resort to any means of manipulation with Hermione...? Thanks again for the story!
person Snapelover11
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What was that last line again???? "Once she came into full power..." Whoa.....dude.....thats awsome.
person Alyssa
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ug. Suspense is killing me. Even worse than A Maid In Devil's Manor... This is undoubtedly my favorite of all your stories.
person Ladyofthemasque
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR* ...Now, have her talk to him about helping her to control her rage...and have HER suggest that they use sex and so forth as the medium, so we can have our smutfest bits again! ;-D ~Lotm
person Inspire
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This developing in a really interesting way. I'm very pleased you've decided to continue it.
person Talene
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will you stop stopping at the good parts?? LOL Damn....please continue....
person Laura
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better. Now that she is aware of her power she will be a force to be reckoned with...with a bit of practice, of course! Hmmm, wonder what the room of requirement will have waiting?

MsFigg- are you surprised at how well this story has fleshed out? Are you glad you decided to continue writing it? I know we are! :-)

Laura
person firewall
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Last couple of chapters - Well he may be an evil, self-serving bastard but at least he was honest with her...I think. I hope she has a long spoon. When you sup with the devil, bring a long spoon.

Harry was wonderful. I get so tired of him being portrayed as shallow and self-centered. This story has made him so much more and he's treating Hermione like a friend not an add-along.
person Q
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY YAY YAY. Down with Dumbledore. UD soon.