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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please. Little drama teaser. What is Dumbledore going to do to stop her from going home for one year or the hols? Does she hook back up with Snape?
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Megan: I assure you, Snape is still a self-serving, black-hearted, cruel bastard. It is only your perception of him that has changed as the story continues because you can see his motivations. You can sort of understand him now. But trust me, he wouldn't care if you understood him or not.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
12:43a More please. Liked the involvement of Harry and how he has been manipulated and is aware of Dumbledore's actions.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this story is gripping. It started as the usual PWP with a touch SM...and then it evolved into one of the best and probably darkest story, I've read in a long time. I check 3 to 4 times a day, luckily you are an incredible quick and good writer...otherwise I would have no fingernails left...... Congratulations on your skills, talent and incredible good plot idea.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Prince: Actually I'm like Snape when it comes to whether you think I'm a good writer or not. Doesn't matter. But you really shouldn't read fanfiction if you think the authors are actually claiming the characters. They might be warping them like I do, but not claiming them. Besides...this is all in fun. Lighten up, bud. Perversing...lolol
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting better.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! Please continue and update asap. I love your stories and you are an awesome writer. I can not wait to read more.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 21 - Harry usually is not my favorite character, but I might be able to tolerate this one. Hmm, what if Harry defeats Voldemort (maybe with help from Severus), and Hermione defeats Dumbledore (with help from Fawkes?).... I would prefer that Hermione evade Dumbly's clutches, especially as she doesn't yet know how to use her new powers. And Severus better be VERY careful when he gets back, as she now knows what a Primordial is, and can guess that Voldy may want her as much as Dumbly! Thanks for the new chapter.
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo!!! This is an awesome story!!! What will Hermione do with all that power? And what a total bastard Snape is!!! So cool! I love it! Does that make me a sick, twisted individule? Or just the loyal reader of a sick, twisted author? Hmm, intriguing. What a dark twist on Albus as well. I really feel sorry for poor Fawkes- he, too, seems trapped in a role he doesn't want to lead. Can't wait for more to develop! Please update ASAP!!! Happy writing, mi chicquita!!! Tengo que irme! Salud!
Hugs,
Killer K :)
Hugs,
Killer K :)
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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you have taken this. At first I wasn't sure I would be able to finish it since your dark Severus is VERY dark but I love the spin. Great job as usual!