rate_review Reviews

This story is so good-it has me on the edge of my seat. I'm so glad Snape is helping Hermione, because they have the same adjenda. I also love the idea of an "Evil" Dumbledore.

i like your plot. that's the only way to go - align yourself with someone who has the same goal. but no more gratuitous sex? at least some hot dreams!

As usual, you have the best story on the site. You have really flipped the script with this one, making a unbelievably believable dark Dumbledore. (say those four words fast ten times!) Smoke must be coming out of your ears writing this one, but updates are a necessity with a story as awesome as this!

good chapter......update soon

chp 20-22: i like!! lots of new developments!!! i have never read about a mean dumbledore, im anxious to see what he does. and i think its great that hermioen is rebelling!! well, update soon!

Awsome update! I can't wait to read more! Please update again and soon! This is an awsome story!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany

man i how snape get to her before the headmaster dose...and that is he going to do ??? please please please more more .. the is great ... later for now

angel

You have done a good job perversing J.K Rowlings Characters. I would say that you are a good writer but you really didn't create this. A true writer creates their characters. They take it and make their story their own. I will not fault you. You have grammatical skill and talent. I give you this much. I will call you a good writer when you create a story that is your own and not a theft of someone elses characters. I look forward to seeing something original from you, instead of more character theft.


Prince Demitri Ivonavitch

oh i think snape better watch out and the dark lord, but will she pick side? or be on her on..oh i can't wait!

Ch 24 - Snape better watch himself. Hermione may be controlling herself now but if he over does her in the sack, over the desk, on the floor, against the wall, wherever they end up, and she is not happy, he may wish he was facing Voldemort's Cruciatus instead.

Hermione I still don't know about her deal with the big V. It could come back and bite her.

Ms Figg, this story is awesome and I'm glad that you continued it because you are able to tell a story so wonderfully. I am hoping we see Hermione ruling with a iron hand clothed in velvet too. Hahahaha Snape deserves it.