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6:43 Goodness, Hermione is setting it up for her to be controlling Snape. Let us just hope she gives it good to Dumbledore. More please.

Oh another hot chapter, really i have to say, i don't care much on the sex, really. I'm just caught up with the drama between these two. For the next part, i don't maybe a lemon , but with one or not, its still damn good and i want to know, will she do something get snape back for what he made her do. i say little payback on her part is in order.

i absolutely love your story. its one of the best ive ever read on this site. please please update soon!

ch 27 & 28 - Interesting, very interesting. My money is on the witch.

Snape's been a brass plated prick so far, but hopefully successive encounters with Hermione will show him what can happen when a real woman (a Primordial, at that!) intersects with a man....even if the man happens to be Snape.

So Hermione is finally controlling her powers. This is good. Can't wait for you to update again! Please do so again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany

If you can`t I will call it Lemons for you.

Yay Lemons!!!

Maybe the juice will be sqished a bit bruttally, but Lemons none the less.

Great.

Sandra

Ch 26-27 - I am SO glad that he got to re-do the dream the right way! Hmm, now will she use this method to give him more "previews of coming attractions".... She needs to be more careful about showing her powers; those two kids she caught will be telling all their friends about it, and even if they exaggerate, it'll arouse suspicion from Death Eaters' kids at the school. Thanks for posting!!! (PS - I do hope Severus has her parents protected by now - Dumbly is not to be trusted!)

i'm not in this for the lemons either b/c the dynamics b/t the characters are sooo good! can't wait to see what happens next!

Glad to find a writer who updates (and finishes!) stories. I sometimes don't read a posting until I see "complete" because a partial story is depressing to me - I know writers need feedback, but boring ol' readers like me need a whole story.
I've saved your quote about friends not counting what they do for each other. It's one of those lines that should be shared (is it original?).
About the story line itself...I really like evil Snape...and even more evil Dumbledore! Makes me wonder if JKR isn't just waiting to make her readers say "Oh no - she fooled us! The good guys are really the bad guys!". I've always seen Snape as more of a schizophrenic than really evil. This Snape reminds me of "that guy" in high school that all the girls wanted to rehabilitate.