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Ch 29 - eeps! May be time to protect the Grangers' dental practice as well. Dumbly sound awfully ruthless and lethal. Poor Fawkes!!

Ch 25 - omigosh, that was great! Poor Severus, but definitely a neat way for you to be creative yet satisfy whoever asked you for a "dream sequence." So, we can ask you for stuff, eh? Heh-heh! I want Dumbly and Voldy to BOTH get thwacked for abusing Severus - and I'd like Hermione to do the honors on Dumbly. Hey, Severus would be a good "consort" for Primordial Queen Hermione, since she can control him (sorta). Again, doesn't have to be romantic. Whatever, as long as you keep writing, I'll be very happy! Thanks for the new chapter, Ms_Figg!

Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.

You too are heartless and cruel to end this here! ARGH! hehe More?

I've held off on writing any reviews for this story as I wanted to see how it progressed, but after reading Prince Dmitri's comment, I really blew a gasket. Does this guy know the meaning of "Fan Fiction"?? There are professional writers on this site who have indeed written original works of fiction, but who choose to write fanfic just for the fun of it, and for the satisfaction it gives other readers.

JKR is a supremely lucky lady in that she happened to grow extremely wealthy by giving us all a wonderful world filled with magic and populated by characters which sprung from her head, but let's face it, she'll probably never win the Booker Prize. I think she is probably supremely flattered (and I've heard that she does read fanfic, if not the smutty ones) that there are gifted writers out there who take the initiative to borrow her characters and give them a depth which is often missing in the HP books (perhaps due to space limitations, or perhaps because she would never want children excluded from her primary audience).

I doubt that there are many fanfic writers here who live in their own castle in Scotland, or whose personal wealth surpasses that of the Queen of England. They're not making one dime from the literary gifts they bestow on others, and that is precisely the point.

NICE CHAPTER! i lke the whole dream and hermione's double thing! update soon.

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever had the pleasure to read, Ms Figg. Your work has a sense of plot that so few writers lack, but the blend between romance and reality is perfectly mixed. I believe you have whetted my appetite for S & M, fortunately. Keep writing, and I will keep reviewing.

Very Impressed,
AR

Hmmm...just got caught up on the last 5 chapters. I wonder if Hermione is going to regret her deal with Voldemort? And I wonder if Severus is going to realize what he could potentially have if he treats Hermione with some respect? Probably not. :P

Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.

gasp. So he does want to hurt her parents.