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Ms_Figg,

I think this is your best story to date, as it has both Sev & Hermione highly *libidoed* and Sev dark, but Herm's *Darker* (heh heh). You go girl, you (and Hermione) of course. Nobody can play that girl. . . !!!! Poor Fawkes. First time I've seen a story where the phoenix is female and not male (why not). This is so much more than PWP (even though that can be pretty tasty). Evil!Albus is pretty squicky. Can't wait for more.

Ch 34 - and the Grangers' house is unprotected (Dumbly could kill them in retribution?), and Harry is still unconscious at Hogwarts unless someone - Dobby? - finds him and wakes him up. I will assume Severus packed up his stuff, 'cuz he has no Hogwarts job now! I think Hermione will need to go out for breaks, rather than be cooped up all day and night with Death Eaters. And she needs to develop her powers more. Hmm.... does she have room in hre quarters for Severus to sleep at her feet? Heh! No, seriously, if I were her I'd want someone I can TRUST with me at all times - Delilah won't cut it.

It just gets better and better!

verra verra good, can't wait for more.

"Harry plans to tell Hermione he knows she is sleeping with Snape. He doesn't know why Dumbledore is dressed as a deatheater, it could be he is on a mission or something, that's why he's waiting. He knows nothing about Hermione's parents being in danger."


Even so, from what we've read so far, we know Harry has deep doubts about Dumbledore allowing Hermione to make her own plans, or to let her go spend a year with her parents. ... If I were him, seeing the headmaster head out in Death Eater robes would have sent up very loud warning sirens in my head. I confess to not being a huge fan of Harry, so his sitting there and waiitng to spot Dumbledore's return is in keeping with his, um, *mumbles*

I think Hermione should come back out and take "possession" of Snape and say that he is hers and no other woman can have him or she'll blast them. But of course that won't happen in this story, because Snape doesn't "feel" anything for Hermione, he's just using her as she is him. It would've been interesting...

*gasp!!!* OMG OMG OMG!!! what to do??? I'm on tenterhooks

Another great couple of chapters. I do not know how you do it. I am just extremely glad I came across your stories and read them. Please continue and keep up the great work.

ch 31 Well I would say that you needed to emphasize the relationship Hermione and Snape have. I think there may be some out there who think this may have a happy, fluffy ending. I can't see this happening at least not between Hermione and Snape.

Ms. Figg-

I did not write the last review attributed to me. Someone used my name, obviously that Dmitri character. You know I would never say such a thing.