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Wow!! You update quick!!! I love it! Keep going!! WOoooooo!

I'm rather glad you didn't stop this story after the shaging, it's starting to turn in to something rather interesting and different.

I'm glad with all of Hermione's incoming powers you havent made her mary sue ish, that would be a bit of a sad thing for such a good story.

please please keep it up..

Really enjoy this story. Have enjoyed your work very much. Can't wait to see what happens between hermione and Snape. Love them as a couple. Again great work.

I've never sent a review before, even though I have really enjoyed all of your stories. This one has been the most interesting, though, what with an evil Dumbledore. I am very anxious to see how it turns out...curious to see how Voldy is going to feel about Hermione. Do you think he'll be "attracted" to her in the same way Snape is? How will Snape feel about that? I know that there is no affection with this "Snape" vs "Severus" in your other stories, but it still seems like he's getting possessive of Hermione, even if there is no outward affection. However, I did find the "spooning" scene indicadive of some perhaps underlying feelings, maybe Snape is unaware of. Whatever he thinks, no man is an island unto himself...

Ch. 32: Ha. Snape is majorly going to have to change his tune if he wants to get anywhere with the new and improved Miss Granger. I find myself not wanting him to though. It would be too much of a cop-out for him to capitulate and turn all "i have seen the light." I trust in your superior skills, however, to bring about some change in their dynamic without getting all 'fluffy bunny.'


I wonder how Dumbledore thinks that he could control a Primordial, even if he did orchestrate her "dependence" on him. Clearly, given this interaction with Severus, a skilled Occlumens, she can effortlessly discern thoughts -- at least those concerning her. How on earth could Dumbledore think he could pull something over her? Does he not fully understand the full range of a Primordial's powers? (Allowing, of course, that not even we do at this point). Ahhhhhh questions! I love it :)

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I enjoy this story more and more with each chapter. I do love an unrepentantly nasty Snape. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us!

Ch 34 - This is going to be interesting...I wonder if Hermione will be able to tap into Voldemort's thoughts. Will Lucius be able to restrain himself in her presence? I can just see him inviting a Cruciatus by mouthing off or perhaps a little Primordial retribution.

ohhh sh** he is pissed .. i hope they can make it out ok .. and i hope harry doesn't get in to much trouble and i hope the remember what mione told him ... i cant wait in till the next chapter ..later for now

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Ch 33 - urgh, yes Harry was indeed VERY stupid - he knew what he was seeing was wrong and yet he ignored his own feelings. I just hope Severus wasn't wrong to make Hermione wait; I think they shoud've just left, checked on her parents. Hmm, maybe the surviving Death Eaters will tell Voldy, who will summon Severus.