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person Pam
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH, this is getting so good. Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
JW: Your mind works too quick girl. Harry plans to tell Hermione he knows she is sleeping with Snape. He doesn't know why Dumbledore is dressed as a deatheater, it could be he is on a mission or something, that's why he's waiting. He knows nothing about Hermione's parents being in danger. Dumbledore wanted to be seen so the death of the Grangers will be attributed to deatheaters by the wizarding world when he is described by the muggle neighbor
person droxy
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEP! evil dumbledore! EEP!
person JW
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 30 - eeps! Time for Hermy to learn Apparation, get an emergency Portkey? Time for Harry to hide too? I wonder if Fawkes would abandon ship with Dumbly.... Ahem: who's watching the Grangers? Thanks for the new chapter!!!
person Maela
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Harry! What on earth was he thinking?!
person Annabel
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Well I'm well hooked now..reel me in.
person aeltiera
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By Merlin Ms_Figg, you updating fiend! Your Snape is so yummy but with an evil sheen...Between two maniacs with villainous intents...Hermione's caught in a web deceit...When Dumbledore goes beserk and turns up the heat...Hermione and Snape might have to beat a retreat...but where can they go and not be found?...Hermione's powers are growing, she won't be bound...by others' manipulations she will tolerate...Becoming Primordial she might decide future's fate...But first she must escape Hogwarts with her delicious git...if only Snape would learn to play nice they both might just fit...Both dark personalities with passion galore...only Ms_Figg knows what's in store!

To you Ms_Figg...your story rocks!
person Maela
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little nervous here! Dumbledore is a pretty powerful wizard. Will four of Death Eaters be enough to stop him? Let alone capture him? And do we really want Dumbledore captured? I honestly have no idea which way you're going to go with this.
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If she does flee to Voldermort, Dumbledore will turn everyone against her but for some odd reason I don't think Harry would believe him. I just don't like how Dumbledore plays human chess. Wouldn't Hermione come into her full powers when she reached a certian age?
person firewall
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 33 - Darn it Harry where is your head? He was showing such promise in this story...he indicated that he didn't trust Dumbledore and paid the price...Now Hermione has lost valuable information. He needs to show a littleof the Slytherin the Sorting Hat saw years ago.