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person Inspire
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling that Draco and Harry should hurry up and get to safety before Minerva reports to Evilbus Dumbledore. Great new development and still an excellent fic.
person angel
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man .. i hope albus dose not take is out on ron and harry ... please please more

angel
person Talene
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!! I wondered when this would occur. Bravo!!!!
person JBB
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started this story yesterday. It keeps me on the edge of my seat. Snape and Hermione are well-written.
person Koda
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, interesting.. I wonder how he'll react. :o
person Maela
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Man! She traded in one mad man for another. And now that Harry has been oblivated, everyone is going to think that the two of them are traitors. I hope our Hermione has a backup plan! Update soon! :)
person Snapelover11
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! You can not stop there! You must continue! Please......
person Maela
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is getting good.! :)
person happilyjaded (not logged on)
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Long time reader, first time reviewer, (sorry 'bout that, I of all people, should know better) but I really couldn't hold back://
person JW
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 31-32 - you've got this awful habit of ending your chapters JUST WHEN YOU'RE AT THE CLIFF!!! Okay, so Harry thinks she is sleeping with Severus but doesn't ask her, and he knows Dumbly is disguised as a Death Eater but he doesn't tell Hermione or Severus (yet), and if he waits for Dumbly's return it may be too late for the Grangers. Dumbly wants to be seen, and I'm guessing he knows there are Death Eaters at the Granger home - is he trying to lead them away from the Grangers to be killed? Will the Death Eaters be smart enough to capture Dumbly? Or is Dumbly trying to be captured as part of his own plot?? I only hope the Grangers' wards are set so that Severus too is notified of someone breaching them. Next chapter, please!!!