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she should took advantage of the situation, force him to be a gentle lover. maybe he'll like it, against his will of course.

Oooohhhhhh! The anticipation! How sweet it is. The next update will be tonight, perhaps! Pretty Please.
Toodles.

I think she should let him be himself or back out of the situation. If she doesn't, she's giving in again to that control and that's not necessarily a good thing. I think you should have her show a sense of maturity and wisdom that comes with her powers.

yes, definatley an 'inside' view on voldemorts part. i really liked it, and yes it makes sense too! but i just have one thing i want to complain about. i am not sure if u did this pruposefully or if it was an accident, but voldemort is not a muggle born, he is a half blood wizard who was brought up in a muggle orphanage. his mother was a pureblood desendent of salazar slytherin, and his father was a muggle.......well just thought i should point that out. but ohter htan that a great chp!! update soon

nicely done, youmanaged this without really compromising Snape, and yes the double standard ridden bastard is territorial. I think it is amusing HG is following Snape's advice and it torques him. Though I wishhe was more honest with her about Voldemort.

Harry's my hero, defending Hermione's honor, Ron's a GIT!!! Draco's yummy. Update ASAP!

Oooo, decisions, decisions. Of the various options available, I think I'd like to see something like Hermione showing Snape what she needs. At the moment he has no real idea about reciprocal feelings, having never had a chance to experience them. I think she should introduce him to the sensuality of touch through some kind of magical link. Make him lie there while she touches him, finding what (if anything) he likes, then get him to touch/kiss her in a similar way so he can feel what it does to her. Then they can get back to the hard and heavy sex ;D

Wow, you are a fast writer. I missed your last update, and I always thought I was a crazy fanfic junkie. Ever since you wrote that scene with Narcissa, I wondered if you would bring Lucius into this somehow. The list with the married Deatheaters really gave me ideas! Seems it wasn't meant to be. Or perhaps you could make it a threesome? I'd like for Lucius to renounce Voldemort and join Hermione. But I think she will be pissed off when he brings Harry to Voldemort. Sigh. What about Draco and Harry? They could come to Voldy together and succumb to the influence of the place...

Love the chapter. How about doing the other death eater thing anyway. Not all the way, maybe. Just playing around. I'd nominate Draco and Lucius for the job. I'd love to see this!

Oh, and I just read your recomended reading list, and wanted to ask you if you read "Dances with Witches" by pearle. You have all my favourites in the list, just not this one. Its about Snape loosing a bet with Dumbledore.