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Ch 41 - very good! I like the way you combined all those aspects. Definitely he'd be in big trouble if Voldy (or Dumbly) caught wind that Hermy wasn't satisfied with Severus. And it would be suicide for her to let other Death Eaters touch her, just one more thing that Voldy has on her that she "owes" him for. She really should be concentrating on developing her powers, with Harry anxious to storm on the scene any time now. And Severus should help prepare her, teaching her Death Eater tactics as well as more Dumbly tactics. If he does that, she'll have more respect for him, thus increasing his chances for survival and freedom. Umm.... I'm not anxious to find out, but what IS that Voldy doing with Pettigrew?

Ch 41 - PS - so was Hermione always intending to use this tactic to manipulate Severus into giving in??? Not another Dumbly, please!

Interesting! I llike that she played him psychologically, and if he was going to capitulate to it at all -- at least he was upfront about his reasons *why*


I still think that she should/may/might find that she doesn't really want what she thinks she does, and you do let both of them allow that she wants the tender *and* the hard. I like your dark Snape very much, and I shouldn't like to see him go "ooooooooooooh, this is what I've been missing my whole life." That's why I really like the two things you did here: she wonders what he may have been like before prolonged exposure to Voldermort's "carnality" (and he acknowledges that he "knows how to kiss"), and you let him, albeit reluctantly, allow that he can do what she likes as long as it is his choice to do so. Choice plays a huge part.


All in all, a great blend of all of our hopes.

Hi It's me again. I've just read some of the other reviews and I also like the option of Hermione taking another deatheater and Snape having to watch. That too could ignite the little spark of genuine affection via the jealousy route.
Toodles.

Much to think about, indeed !!!
I really appreciate that turn of events.
I loved your other stories but this one is undoubtedly the best one.
I wonder what you have still in store, certainly a nice christmas gift.

That was a teriffic idea!! I can't wait to see how tender he can be

Wow! That was deep coming from Voldemort! I love how Hermione was for once using Severus! It was great! Please update again and soon. Can't wait to read more!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany

I think this is the hottest HGSS story I've ever read. You've really outdone yourself Ms. Figg.

interesting. i like the way u wrote the chp. seems a bit diff from the rest, btu in a good way. i think that for the next chp, you should start out where hermione commands snape to be gentle w/ her and stuff, and then she finds out that that isnt satisfying enough so he goes back ot his 'old way' but along the way he tunrs a tiny bit nicer, and then partway through their little session, she is summoned my the dark lord about somethign, so snape is once again left unsatisfied.....so, i think u should do somehting along htose lines, and incorporate a few more ideas.....update soon!

Loved the chapters. Was great to see Snape concede. But what about Voldie, shouldn't he be more on sick, sexual enforcement towards Hermione? What about Harry's meeting Voldie? And who is another spy for Dumbledore? More please soon. Thanks.