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person beeky63
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello Ms. Figg. First off, I have to say that this story is bloody brilliant. Second in answer to your poll, I would like to see Hermione give Snape leave to do as he pleases. He in turn would be a gentle lover for her, and in the process maybe start to feel genuine affection for her (just a little spark to start with and then as the story progresses that spark can fan into a flame). Despite the fact that Snape is dark in this fic I'm still a sucker for a happy ending. Look forward to the next update. Toodles.
person denise
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea! please update soon!
person Wilowisp
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm with Kasile on this one, I'd like to see Hermione take on a different Deatheater and see how Snape likes to be put on the sidelines--plus it would have to irk him that Hermione is just as capable of getting what she needs *physically* from someone else. Hell, now that I think about it a threesome might be fun too. Hahahaha.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think Hermione would like it slow and gentle at this point. What with the situation, her mood, and the surrounding lust, she would be more satisfied with a hard Snape. But she should make him kiss her. I think he would be surprised to find out he liked it.
person *Ramos*
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think she should tie him up and have her naughty way with him
person LemonLover
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're just evil.... Not that we'd have you any other way, but I had to say it.
person septentrion
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch 41 : brillant ! I was sure Severus could be bent to Hermione's will without being forced to. And he may enjoy it more than he initially thought...
person Edania
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just reread everything and i should say, if you don't really what not to do , for now for next chapter..leave it as cliff hanger for now, and go back to harry. I would like to know what does happen to him , whats going on? That could give you some kind of break for a while..so no rush at all. Can't rush good writting.
person Pam
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great post, please post again soon. Thanks.
person Dea
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with willowwisp and kasiie. Maybe seeing her with someone else will make him think twice about underestimating her. Besides, a jealous and horny Snape could be fun