rate_review Reviews

thats soo sweet, harry fighting for hermiones honor! but hes also a bit stupid for going TO the dark lord. btw, where are our lemons? :( anyway, please update soon

First I would like to say that I agree with one of your readers when she says she would like to read something written by you which is not fanfiction. It's not the matter of the day but it's something I wanted to ask you too.
Concerning Miss Granger, if I was her, I would like to keep Snape for myself and try to change his manners and maybe a little part of his heart. I would use Voldemort to make him jealous.
It's not very original, but I'm not Mrs FIGG after all.

YAY tenderness....:)

I don't know what you should do - I wouldn't want to ruin it with my ideas. You should keep going it's really good.

love ur story keep up the good work

Hi there,
This is a great story ! A couple of times I got the impression that Snape did feel something more. One thing you could do for the next chapter is they start to
have sex and part way through there is a small change in Snapes behavior and he notices it.It freaks him out so that he can't ummm...continue(WEG).
Hermione gets frustrated either because he doen't follow through and or because she notices the difference too. When I say difference,I don't mean instant
"hearts and flowers" from Snape,just enough of a difference that he can't ignore or deny to himself at least. Am I wrong to think there were those moments where Snape did feel something more? This is a really intriguing set up.
Catharine

Well, we already know that Hermione is quite capable of using her power over Snape to gain her own pleasure, but at the same time she

Septithol: Hi. I'm not sure that Hermione magically changing Dumbledore, Voldy and Snape's makeup is a viable solution. Such things like love, understanding and compassion stem from the soul of an individual. Just like magic can't bring a person's soul back from death, I don't believe it can change the soul of a living man either. Only realization and experience can do that. Magic has its limits.

I hve been coming to this website for about a month now, and just recentlygot a user name finally. I just wanted to say that this story is one of my favorites on this site. I think that hermione would want to keep the dealings between herself and Snape honest. I did like the idea another reviewer had of her primordial powers nullifiying the carnal spells Voldemort has cast. I would also like to see what happens to Harry with that whole situation soon as well. I think that bit is intrigueing as well. How will Voldemort play that? He will have Harry there in front of him, but because he is trying to woo Hermione, will he play nice with Harry? I can't wait to read more! SS

Fascinating depiction of Voldemort! I'm kind of hoping he'll send Snape to charm school (muggle style). He sure needs it!