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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, another mind blowing chapter. You truly have a gift Ms. Figg. I am exceedingly enthusiatic about your next chapter, and I commend you on your choice of Snape's desicion to be gentle with Ms. Granger. Quite the deviantion from his normal brutality. I cannot wait for the next installment. Keep up the wonderful work.
Fascinated,
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Fascinated,
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say for this point, force him to nice. I know that will make him mad . The more mad he is the better for the upcoming chapters.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think she should force him to be fair, not gentle. He can have his fun, but has to make sure she enjoys herself as well ;)
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We have learned before, that a gentle lovemaking is not what Hermione needs and wants
She should let Snape act as himself, but should make it a term that he will also meet her needs and give her satisfaction.
I am still of the opinion, that those two are sexually well suited for each other.
Sandra
She should let Snape act as himself, but should make it a term that he will also meet her needs and give her satisfaction.
I am still of the opinion, that those two are sexually well suited for each other.
Sandra
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull! I love your story. Your Harry is the epitome dumb Gryffindor, rushing without thinking into the most dangerous situations. Hermione using Snape and Snape unconsciously liking it was great. Does Voldy actually believe what he says? Who knows how his psychopathic mind works... Can Hermione sense it if he is lieing? She could sense Snapes thoughts after all, on the other hand, they have a special connection... I have to admit I don't like your Dumbledore much, he is too obvious at times. But then, if he was as subtil as in canon, Hermione would have never realized she was manipulated. (I still think Dumbledore planned his death, btw. I just don't buy the naive and trusting grandfather role he was playing in book 6. It doesn't match the first 5 books.) Your Voldy is brillant, manipulative and evil, just as I like him best. When you wrote about the potions, I was a bit confused. Does Hermione know about them or not? Did she sense it when she spoke with Voldy, or from Snape?
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 40 - (I haven't read any other reviews for this chapter, so if I echo someone else's comments, it's not intentional.) I think Severus should act next - make her a deal that if she promises to not fall for Voldy's lies or Dumbly's lies, and to not try to control Severus after the war, Severus will try to give her what she wants now, but he reminds her that any "gentleness" is just an act for him. She will respect that he is still the only one who tells her the truth, so after they do the "gentle" stuff she rewards him by letting him have her the "non-gentle" way, which she still enjoys (especially with her new powers). Hopefully, Pettigrew doesn't overhear any of this. And the Grangers are still being protected? Did she ever find out that two Death Eaters died fighting Dumbly at her parents' home? 'Cuz Voldy could use that to try to curry her favor.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you and your super prompt updates!! You don't know how much that makes my day on days like today. I LOVE this fic. Keep up the great work.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am all for some cruel and unusual punishment. Maybe Hermione should go and fuck another deatheater and make Severus watch the whole ordeal. Boy would he be pissed. Oh or let him be all rough and tough, but just when he's about to get off, make him go slow and gentle. That would really suck for Snape
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm still waiting for Hermione to grow a brain and use her new powers to give Dumbledore, Voldemort, and Snape a good conscience and sense of compassion.