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person Marsha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 41 - Sigh...you are a Goddess!
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great set of update! I can't wait to find out what happens with Harry and Lucius! Please update again and soon!

Your biggest fan,
Tiffany
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't disagree with Hermione making Snape kiss her. However, I don't think she'd find as much pleasure in gentle lovemaking as she would in rough sex. So in my opinion, maybe Hermione could order Snape to kisss her and let her touch him, but then excellerate to brutle fucking.
person Marsha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If a Primordial has the ability to do spell-less magic, then she also has the ability to change a man's heart. I don't want to go with the fluffy, as this fic has satisfied a perverse place in my heart. I'd like to see a fluffy lemon chapter, with Snape screaming all the way, followed by Hermione's realization that she doesn't want to follow Dumbledore and Voldemort's lead by forcing/changing Snape.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very satisfactory. A+ As I've said before, I love this fanfic!! :)
person Edania
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh you got me good on that one and i loved it! OH what happens i wonder but one question..what happens with harry? I wonder really. I mean i like the whats going with snape.. but i wonder what happen to little harry?
person Tasha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Hermione should dominate Snape, it really pisses him off!! but i'm torn between seeing what snape would be like as a gentle lover, maybe he'll like it???
p.s I LOVE THIS STORY!
person Edania
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh sorry Ms._Figg i happen to read reply to me about harry. well that answers my question. Didn't mean to bring it up again in my last review. One last thing I loved chapter 41..i can see this story really turing into novel maybe. Again, my thanks to you.
person Brianne
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been on and off with this story...it's dark, and I'm not normally much of a dark fic person...but I find myself enjoying it none the less....I vote for letting him be himself....
person Marsha
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS, Speaking of perverse, sex scene with Voldemort, please, please, please. If you hadn't described his, ahem, sexual attributes, I wouldn't have all these really decadent images running through my head.

You really have become my favorite author. You write, like I would want to, if I could, which I can't.