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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.. good question. i say, back out. it's too evil for her to force him, and it doesn't seem like the right mood for rough-n-tough... haha i really have no clue. awesome chapter!!!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am really impressed with the thoughtful responses (and the little plot bunnies you guys are trying to put in). I thank you all for your opinios and ideas. I think I know what I am going to do, incorporating a bit of this and that from all of you.
Edania: It isn't that I didn't know what to write, I just wanted to do something different and involve my readers. They invest a lot of time reading my work and its a way to feel closer to them, and let them know I care what they think. As for Harry I can't do anything with him yet because not enough time has passed yet. I don't think Lucius will jump on it immediately. He'd want to make sure it wasn't a trap. But I will be returning to Harry soon.
Thankyou all so much!
Edania: It isn't that I didn't know what to write, I just wanted to do something different and involve my readers. They invest a lot of time reading my work and its a way to feel closer to them, and let them know I care what they think. As for Harry I can't do anything with him yet because not enough time has passed yet. I don't think Lucius will jump on it immediately. He'd want to make sure it wasn't a trap. But I will be returning to Harry soon.
Thankyou all so much!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have the feeling that Snape is getting caught in a Hermione-Net.
And why not, she seems to be needing someone with certain talents and he obvisiusly has them.
Sandra
And why not, she seems to be needing someone with certain talents and he obvisiusly has them.
Sandra
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Because I love romance I would want to see Snape be gentle with her. But it would be cool to see some of his inner monologue while he is doing it. That way you can see the real severus still.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ch 40 : I think Hermione could get some more control over Severus if she lets him express his true nature in bed. The way you write their interaction, I'm sure he'll kiss her willingly (or nearly willingly) soon. And I must admit I like reading smut ;)
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Harry's gonna get killed. >>;
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr* Man, he's laying on the 'poor me' rhetoric, isn't he? The whole 'freedom fighter' speech. *bullshitbullshit!* ...Oh, pardon me, seems I just sneezed twice... Update faster with more more more, please, yes? ~Lotm
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just read the entire story. It is absolutely amazing. It almost seems like this is actually what is going on in the series... except for Dumbledore being alive. What Voldemort said even makes sense!! Amazing Ms. Figg, absolutely brilliant.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 42 - hmm, so Harry remembers up to Ch 32, waiting outside Severus' rooms. Which means he should remember Ch 31, where Hermione tells him that Dumbly knows of her Primordial powers, she's going into hiding, and she says: "I will always remain loyal to you, Harry. And to the wizarding world. No matter how it appears outwardly. ... You may hear bad things about me in the future. It won
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Since the true Snape turns her on he should do it his way, only he should be 'encouraged' to please her in the ways she likes and to let her also take control again. He did actually like it, after all. :-)
I'm kind of shocked to be thinking this but....I think I'd like to see Voldy do Hermione! *sorry!* Then she can come into her powers and kill him! That whole serpent-cock thing is so very interesting!
I'm kind of shocked to be thinking this but....I think I'd like to see Voldy do Hermione! *sorry!* Then she can come into her powers and kill him! That whole serpent-cock thing is so very interesting!