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person Megan
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY. That was crazy creative. I love how you keep giving both of them what they need and then dragging it away.
person snapescat
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are truely amazing.
Your stories are addictive and they just get better and better.
What an imagination you have.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LadySunflower
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HG/SS, HG/HP, HG/DM....all have this wonderfully horrid thing where they hate Ron's guts. I really wish they didn't. You don't, but I don't think for a second that Ron would be so disloyal. Now, as for an initial reaction, it's fine - he learned a lot in a short amount of time, and he isn't very tact - but Ron's main redeeming quality is his loyalty and friendship. I don't think he'd abandon Hermione so easily.
person droxy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tension is certainly thick- a jealous dark lord is not a good thing
person Pam
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great post....wonder what up with snape....please post again soon. Thanks.
person JW
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 43 - poor Severus better watch his back more, although I'm not sure if he should tell Hermione any more about Voldy lusting after her. So her powers might increase after "tonight"? (BTW, I had this brief thought today of Hermione the Primordial with PMS; I wondered if she would get cranky and irritable, sort of like Primordial puberty. Right.... I'll just shut up now.... sorry!)
person Ms_Figg
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LadySunFlower: You're right about Ron. Initial reaction. He talks (freaks out) before he thinks...always and is hot-headed. But he really is loyal.
person firewall
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 44 - Okay, so Snape gave her the tenderness she requested...I hope she doesn't forget he's a self-centred bastard who is using her for his own gain.
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapters! They were lovely to come home to this morning!
person JW
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 44 - ah, a little stress relief for the Primordial! I was wondering for a while if a drunken Priordial would wreak havoc with her powers, but all seems to be fine for now. (BTW, I can't remember if she's covered by a contraceptive. She is, right? No pregnant Primordial here?)